I really like the sound of the acoustic guitar, and the electric sounds nice too. The drums are sticking out to me though, as something that could use some work. The snare is bothering me… I think something snappier would sound better, with a bit more of a tail. The kick isn’t coming through that much either and I suspect I wouldn’t be able to hear it on smaller speakers. The whole drum kit sounds kind of muffled and far away.
The bass sounds pretty good to me, except that it’s difficult to hear. I can feel it so I know it’s there, and if I concentrate I can hear it, but it’s not cutting through. To me, this isn’t always a problem… but you could try a bit of saturation or something if you want it to cut through more.
The guitars sound fine to me. The vocal has a thin nasal tone with no body. The bass is a bit dark and could use some midrange. The drums sound like they were done by a non drummer. The patterns are hap hazard and they really don’t flow. There are cymbal crashes in strange spots.
Listening as I type and have not read other comments yet.
Those acoustics sound awesome!!! In regards to your concerns, if I were picky I’d say that the snare is a bit odd at times in that the initial punch is a bit clicky, but that’s me looking for something.
If anything, there are a few level issues which could be easily fixed. I found the tom hits a bit too up front or perhaps boomy compared to the rest of the kit, especially when compared to the kick.
I like the vocal level later in the song but the first verse seems very covered and quiet (coming from me who buries vocals!).
I think overall it’s sounding pretty good. Nice one.
Only thing that bothered me was the LOFI vocals in the opening and then came clean after, to my ears it didnt sound right for this kind of track.
I would attempt to run clean vocals all the way through and maybe add that LOFI vocal effect either around the middle of the track or near the end.If not, keep it clean all the way through or use another more fitting effect on the vocals if you wish to keep it at the start.At the very least, make that LOFI vocal effect “less LOFI” and scale it back to a more “cleanish” vocal but with a subtle LOFI effect and not so pronounced.
Nothing else stood out in a major way on my first listen, but i may come back and give more information.
Hey @Tesgin, I enjoyed your playing on this. Very nice. I don’t really have anything more to offer in terms of feedback from what the others have said, other than perhaps a song you can use for comparison. (?) The solo-outro starts around 3:20 and may give you some direction as far as balances and tones. HTH!
Thanks, Dan. I do feel good about the acoustics, but sometimes I feel good about things I shouldn’t feel good about! So, thanks for the validation.
Cristina commented on the snare as well. Y’know, I was experimenting with an envelope to control the velocity of the snare. Maybe I did too much and need to scale it back. I’ll work on that next.
Yup. You are right. I hear that now.
Are you referring to the beginning with the “radio” EQing of the verse? Or to the repeat of that verse with regular EQ? I “think” you’re referring to the latter. I struggled with mixing the vocals, balancing the soft and louder parts. What I did was gain stage the clips so they were a more uniform volume, so the effects of the compressor were more even; then, I used volume automation to balance the softer and louder parts. Maybe I overdid it?
Thanks for this. Yeah, I wasn’t sure about that either. I “liked” it, but as you said, maybe not for an entire verse. Maybe not to start the song also. Will fix.
I wanted to do something different for variety’s sake, to make the first iteration of the verse different. Should I nix the repeat of verse 1 altogether? Vary it up in some other way?
Love the acoustics, agree with others that the drums are the main thing. The snare in particular sounds like it’s being smothered under a mattress-load of compression. I think the muffled drums, in another context, could work. But against the brightness of the acoustic-led arrangement, they sound like the drummer was through the wall in a different studio.
I hear what you mean with the balance of the guitars and also with the drums mix. Helpful reference. I just reposted my remix (above). Love to hear what you think.
I think I like the 2nd version with no vitamin, although now your vocal is pushed back too much. Actually, the level in the beginning is fine, but when all the guitars get cranking, the vocal kind of gets buried. Drums sound a lot better to me too, although the toms are still too loud. Lots of cool guitar parts - very nice! The squeaky fret noise on the right acoustic needs to be tamed. Other those tiny and simple things, ithis sounds really solid and well-put together. Nice job!
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I take it back, you’ve got your toms just fine if you’re comping that Phil Keaggy song. Although is toms are too loud too! That has got to be one of THE best outros ever…
I can’t add anything that hasn’t already been pointed out. About the only think I could nitpick (and it’s totally personal preference) is the sound of the fingers sliding on the acoustic guitar. That’s one of those things that always stands out to me.
Yeah, miked mentioned that too. Any EQ suggestions that might help there? Maybe a de-esser or dynamic EQ? Anything shy of re-recording?
Also, how do you feel about the vocals? Nobody else said anything about it, but ocnor suggested they sounded too thin and nasal. I re-EQ’d but would love any thoughts there. I think they sound “better” but am thinking or re-doing as well, unless y’all think it’s okay?
Hi I been really busy and missed this. Wow nice intro. Those guitar accents are great. Almost too much space between verse at first. Very seldom I have an upbeat religious song that I tapped my foot. You are a great guitarist. congrats
Grab an EQ like Melda’s or a Deesser like the Waves Sibilance that let’s you “solo” the frequency and hunt down the squeaks that way. Then Deess/Dynamic EQ them. You don’t have to totally get rid of them, they make your playing sound “organic”, just reduce the harshness and loudness. That’s how I’d try to do it anyway. Maybe someone else has a better technique?
Hi again. It is just a personal preference. I like to hear singing by 15 or so seconds. Your start is at 30. There is great guitar to listen to tho. Big space between 50 seconds and 1:10 as well. Seems like you could say a lot more?? and let those guitars play on. Good thing about a review, you can take it or leave it. It’s kinda like you told me to cut back on the reverb. I am going to:) I used a reverb called cathedral (appropriate for your song) anyway the preset was 20% and I cut it to ten right off. That AGG and LA610 add a bunch so I will cut that maybe to 5 or not at all. Peace friend, this song is good
That has got to be one of THE best outros ever…