Hey, it’s the first mix with added bass and this is somehow what the tracks need… but individual mileage may vary
Your mix sounds really well but different than the provided mix. I really like your work with ambiance. It also seems that you did a lot of automation and so, the song get more movements that way.
Mixing wise, I found your mix being shy on low, like you use too much hi-pass filter and the result is guitars and vocals sound too thin to me. It lacks of that intimacy the song required I think.
By the way, really nice point of view of this song, good job!