Thanks mate !
woaw, very natural mix !
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Nice work my friend.
I like very much the overall clarity and power, and the sound of the guitars and snare.
Some suggestions that I would do.
Turn the Rhythm Gtrs a bit down because they cover the vocals. Especially in the verses.
The lead vox could need a bit of de-essing at some points.
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Thanks man… appreciate it… agree
is it possible to change the mix after I posted here?
According to the rules you can’t. Only the first post counts for the competition. But I would like to hear it with those small issues solved nonetheless.
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Check out the contest rules again (linked below). Unfortunately, you only have one shot at it. Once you post your official mix here, that’s it. What a lot are doing is first posting their test mixes for critique on “Bash This Recording”, then posting here once they are happy it’s the best it can be.
http://indierecordingdepot.com/t/the-contest-details-and-rules/141
Great sound. Like the vox up one more db. ha ha Like the unusual timing of that first riff. The power chords to me were just a touch hot. Not much really to pick apart here. Nice work:)
Sincerely
Paul
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I like what you did with the guitars.
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Bashing as I listen:
I like the overall tone on this one, no harshness and great full tones.
The low end lacks a bit of clarity though, I guess there’s some frequency build up there that you could have better controlled. Vocals would need a little extra pass of automation to stay on top.
Not a fan of the distorted vocal at 2:34, it sounds a little incongruous at this point only, and the tone is a little too lo-fi compared to the rest of the tune.
But all in all, a pretty good mix! 
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I really like the EQ on this one, but my one area of critique would have to be the dryness of the recording. It’s a little brittle sounding, I’d add more reverb and some delay on the vocals. If you put a 90-150 ms predelay on the vocals it helps give them life while keeping the reverb from making it sound murky. Ping pong delay on the vox has a widening effect, panning one delay in the left ear and panning a slightly longer one in the right ear. It’s a great technique I picked up from the '80s, one of the only good tricks I picked up during that decade!
Cheers,
Doubletrackinjive
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I do put reverb and predelay on the vocal… but just subtle amount.
yeah pingpong delay great idea… thanks mate
so sad 
Solid smooth mix Well played
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Good guitar tone! 
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thanks mate
Sounds great and balanced to me. Very smooth high end.
There may be couple dbs too much in low subs. Or maybe it’s a question of taste…
Well done!
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glad you like it… yeah maybe bcos of the bass track HPF. I Should’ve roll off more
Good mix, I would give toms a bit more punch.
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Sounds big and nice! And the guitar pretty natural… But I think the bass need to be more in front, or just me! Cheers anyway!
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Sounds great and well-balanced.
Love this track!
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