Nice sounding track, the guitars sound natural although they are not quite my cup of tea, a little bit on the edgy side, at least for this song imho. Low end is pretty good, although you do have some slight imbalances in the bass guitars low frequencies, they need to be tamed a little, try a multiband compressor at 130Hz, and compress just that part of the spectrum, 4:1 ratio or above if it’ s still not tamed, use a slightly slower attack say 15ms, just to avoid any low frequency distortion, (don’t go too fast on the release either) and you’re set to go. Apart from that, the vocal is on the sibilant side, and those awkward breaths could have been chopped out
I love what you did with the drums, snare is just right, great sounding overheads.
Keep up the great work!