Hi Aaron,
That sounds a lot like the 80’s are here again. I was never a big fan of that era (even though I was quite active as a musician at the time), I guess I just don’t like synths all that much (even though I use them now and then). But this is a pretty good take on music from that time. I like the way the rythm of all the synth parts work together to make a groove that gets your head bobbing. I’m not sure I like the way you use reverb on the vocal. It’s obviously intentional, but it makes your voice (I’m guessing it’s your voice) rather harsh. Using an eq to filter off the high end might make it a little bit more natural. Are you using predelay on the verb? That might help to get your voice more upfront. Or maybe a short delay instead of the reverb? Are you doubling your vocal track at all? It could also be some sort of comb filtering effect caused by the the copies of your vocal. Maybe the fase switch could help you out?
I’m just guessing of course. There’s much more expierienced people here, maybe they have some ideas?
I like the way the song ends. Had to listen twice to make my mind up about that one, but I do.
The drums are OK, but could sound bigger. If you want more of the the 80’s effect try the gated reverb trick on the snare (you can find vids on how to do it on the web). But a bit more compression on the drum bus might also help.
Well, that’s my 2 cents.
I’ve just uploaded a new version of Äll mine"last night by the way 