By Jove, I think you’ve got it!
The choir sounds so much smoother now with just a minor volume tweak, @ingolee.
I’ve been listening to my original, too, and this version is better in every way- not as hot as original, and manually pitched corrected, and just fitting very nicely with all the other instruments. And the wind hiss and piano are now more expressive and fitting with the vocals. The guitar and bass also are quite present in the mix. They really pop at many points in natural gaps, and it sounds really good to me. Overall I love this mix! I think this is the one.