Wrote these country lyrics last night...additions or corrections appreciated

I am now at my Texas home/apartment. I have only written two country songs so far. I am sure this topic has been covered tons of times. I have noticed tho, that wearing a cowboy hat brings with it a perceived improved character change IMHO
I might have rhymed a bit too much. The last paragraph/verse was suggested by my daughter cuz i omitted the belt buckle. I might get some tracks ready today. My voice has no twang, so??

I’m gittin me a new look

Nearly invisible…. I’m walkin down the street

Not even any eye contact …with folks that I meet

There is somethin missing…I do not feel complete

I need to accessorize …so i… can…be…unique

I’m gittin me a new look …how,s about that

Went out at bought myself a brand new stetson hat

Don’t matter if yur skinny…. bow legged or fat

Folks are gonna notice you sportin that cowboy hat

Walkin down that same street the very next day

Guys were nodding…gals were smilin lookin my way

I’m diggin this attention… I have to say

This purty black Texan hat… for shore…is…here…to…stay

I got me a new look…how’s about that

Guess I’ll have to throw away my baseball cap

Folks have been more friendly…even my cat

Made changes in my giddy up…that little ole cowboy hat

My status has improved…gonnna further the hustle

I know my best friend will surely have themselves a chuckle

I need all this help…cuz I ain’t got no muscles

Another thing I’m gonna buy a shine-e…new… belt buckle

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Hi @feaker ,
I am so impressed with you, my friend.
I was thinking that you are deep into the work you were involved, and then you have this project right away!!!
Welcome back to Texas!
Of course, the cowboy hat is the key to these songs!!!
Excited to hear your Texas-Twang!
Love this.
Rene

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With my Stetson pulled down over my face
No one knows what I think of this place.

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I might be smiling trying to hide a Michigan chuckle
Or a Derringer behind my brand new buckle.

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Got it. A little messy, but it works well.

My status has improved…gonnna further the hustle
I know my friends in Michigan will have themselves a chuckle
I need all this help…cuz I ain’t got no muscles but I counter
with a derringer tucked behind my …new… belt buckle

Also, common here, is a sack with nads hanging off the trailer receiver on many pick-up trucks. Go Texas