Hey dgarner, life does find away to get in the way, but you got a mix up.
Things don't sound bad I like the guitar part you added in the intro(.38). It sounds like you did a total replacement on the snare? Well, like me though there's a few mis-triggers an timing issues with it plus the leveling . Staying with the drums the hi hat has some ringing FREQ at 2.10 2 to 4 k range that needs some notching.
Also, maybe a little vocal automation along with lead, bg vocal editing.
Overall, I think with more time and some minor tweaks you could ,polish it up and you'd be rt There.