This one actually started off a couple weeks back using VH 'Somebody get me a doctor" as a reference. Though of course it changed a lot it still managed to keep some semblance of that smoky blues sound
Cool tune. The only thing I notice is that the guitar on the left seems unbalanced. I beleive on the early VH albums they panned reverb opposite the guitar to fill in the space. The guitars all seem a little dry to me. Maybe more delay and/or reverb would help them sit better.
Nice job! It sounds like a tough song for the singer. That would be my only bash. If he was a touch tighter on the phrasing, and not sliding into pitch quite as much it would compliment the song a bit more. Sounds like he’s searching for it a little bit. Other than that it is very well done.
the singer is me and the melodies etc WERE being searched for as i sang it lol. I assume this would be what people might call a first draft. It was just done quickly for a '5 songs in 5 days" challenge