You are right about the song being sad! Kind of reminds me of the song “Last Kiss”.
Everything fits this song really well. The drums are set back but provide enough push without being noticed. In fact, everything sits back behind the vocal which makes the vocal more intense and it works really well.
Good (sad) stuff!
I hope this is not a true story, Paul, because it is like an older adult tragic crash song. Only thing lacking is the crash sound effects in the background…
No doubt! @feaker, you always have such creative stories in your lyrics that tend so seem so personal that it’s hard to tell which you’ve experienced and which ones you’ve just imagined. It’s pretty incredible really. Have you ever considered writing short stories also?
Hi Boss. I usually write from a personal experience. I do however, take the story to a whole new level for interest’s sake. For example the nasty song I put up a few days ago about young ladies in a convertible hitting on me the old man. Half was fabricated. The next part is always the toughest to get a chord pattern and interesting lyrical notes…and expression. Rene has done some great work with only lyrics. kudos to him. good to hear from you and thanks