Hey, Big Al!
I listened on monitors and headphones, and it sounded nice and balanced on both.
Minor constructive critique:
To me, personal preference of course, this song cried out to have some depth created by reverb and delay, so I did find this mix very dry overall. I thought the guitar and vocals could both benefit from some effects to add depth.
Perhaps vocals could use some increased compression.
I thought the second guitar could be brought up in the mix.
Also thought the background vocals could be brought up in some parts.
Happy Friday to you!