Hey there moa22
Nice mix, very good low frequency balance, the bass is smooth and works well with the kick. The only thing this mix is missing is the high frequency content: the cymbals, hi hats, and acoustic guitars, they are all buried beneath and if you've let them shine this would have been an ace mix. I think an easy fix would be just to place an EQ on your master buss and do a high shelf boost, give it some 2-4 dB of gain from about 6kHz and up, and listen how it opes up.
Nice overall job