I have implemented many of the suggestion from yawl and thank you for that. I have come to dislike it because of the number of times I have messed with it.
I will be the first to admit this song is a mess. I started with a riff and built as I went. I’m three days into it. I know it isn’t a chart topper, but it was fun to do. I’m 68 now and keep thinking “it’s the end”, so every time I produce a song, I feel, well, not so old. ha ha
Was wondering if the bass following the riff works better than the one that comes later after the bridge that just pounds away…or whatever I did there. Also the drums are just a couple I found in EZdrummer.
If you find it even a little entertaining I would be happy. The guy gets messed up and dumps his gal, later to have second thoughts. thanks for listening