What ya think ?
The beginning has a excellent Another Brick In The Wall vibe. The guitar part between 2:38 and 3:00ish could be a little louder. Overall, I like what I hear.
The song and especially the vocalist has a Nickelback sound/vibe. No offense, I know some people hate Nickelback … but I don’t, and that’s my “sound ID” for this. Most of it sounds really good. I think the vocal could have just a touch more reverb, it’s sounding kind of dry. Vocalist is quite good though, I’m just nitpicking to give the mix glue. That snare sound started to bug me after awhile. Some ringing/resonance at 400-600Hz (?) that’s a bit annoying. It’s really up front though, maybe that’s it. If you love that snare sound maybe some (more) plate reverb to push it back in the mix just a touch.
Mixed again and spent more time
Hey, I listened to both mixes and I really some improvements.
Stan_Halen spotted some fixes and I think you got them.
The only culprit I had is some lack of separation: I wish the lead singer to has more space with some kinda '80 reverb on it to match the guitar playing.
Nice job!
Must re visit it some time
You’re right. It’s almost a carbon copy of Part 1 of the three part masterwork.