I like the addition of the bass track, but it feels like it wants too much attention for a track like this. The mids in that bass are distracting from the vocals more than they are supporting it. If I was working with this bass track, I’d probably just low pass it at 100Hz and try to turn it into a sine wave so that it fills in the low end but gets out of the way.
The vocals sound pretty good, but those esses are pretty harsh and distorted at times.
The snare also has this super boost in the high frequencies thing going on which I think helps it cut through, but was done a little heavy handed.
I only mentioned the things that I would change. I think the balance and space is all nicely done.