Bashing as I listen:
I like the overall tones of this one. It’s punchy but not harsh, the ambiance is not overdone. I agree that there’s some low end build up especially during the chorus, when the bass is playing more sustained notes, so I guess better shaping the bass would address the loss of clarity there.
The lead guitar could have a little bit more mid range and less highs but it’s not off by much IMHO.
Quite solid overall. Good job!