Please Bash: 9 to 5 (barely alive) v2

David Talbot

Well, David, we need to create a band! :joy:

:joy: Nice to meet you Patrick

Waitā€¦ Both of you have the surname Talbot?? How cool is that?

Time to resurrect my ā€œTalbotizerā€ faux plugin graphic!

Loving the Floyd vibes iā€™m getting from this. Consider this a request for a full album

Thanks Matthew! Glad you liked this. I do all sorts of things, hoping from one style to another depending on the song and inspiration, so Iā€™m afraid an album of mine would be quite incoherent :joy:

The closest I did in terms of vibe would be this one:
https://soundcloud.com/patrick-talbot/close-your-eyes

Huhā€¦?. Well, Iā€™m afraid I have to strongly disagree Patrickā€¦ an album from you would be quite wonderful actually!!!
:sunglasses:

Oh Emma! Thatā€™s nice of you to say, but Iā€™m afraid I donā€™t have your consistencyā€¦
An album from me would be a mish-mash of various styles with no coherence at all, Iā€™m afraid (apart from my vocal, which is far from the best thing in my tunes either!).
In terms of mixing too it would range from awful to OKā€¦

Love the song and the mix! I agree with the delay, and there are many options to address it. I think at the least the volume of the repeats need to decrease in volume; otherwise, great job.

Thanks Fishmed! Glad you liked the song. Iā€™ve decreased the volume of the delays in the final version, and removed some of them as well, I think itā€™s fine now, see here:
https://soundcloud.com/patrick-talbot/9-to-5-barely-alive

ptaly Love the crowd talking. Piano beautiful. Vox great but too low. Slightly floydish. love your high notes man. Slightly beatleish too. I would be happy with one db on your voice. ha ha This is just so mellow bud. love it

Sincerely

Paul

Thanks Paul! I kinda like the vox tucked in the band, so itā€™s always a struggle for me to push it one db! :laughing:

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