Interesting mix, Oz... I think you may have gotten carried away with the bass a bit too much. The mix sounds very "woolly" to my ears, and the bass is really taking too much space. It's effectively robbing the mix of clarity.
@BengtS really nailed the main points of the critique down for me - I pretty much agree on all those points.
It's great to hear you take the mix in a bold direction, but whenever you do that, I think referencing becomes even more critical. Even when I hear bold and different-sounding commercial mixes, they generally sit comfortably in a playlist with more "normal" sounding mixes, so that's something I try to bear in mind in that situation.