Daughters and six grandkids are arriving tomorrow to stay several days. I will have just a little time to doctor this fever before the deadline. I changed the verse lyrics completely. Just got tired of the original. The dude still gets a fever when he sees her. ha ha The intro is lame and I am stumped there. Have to come up with something clever. I wasn’t going to enter the contest, but I thought what the heck. Can’t win if you don’t try.
I would suggest adding some more delay on the intro and background vocals. i am digging this take. Yeah man i am trying to scramble to get something together for the deadline. enter.
Good saturation! dig it! Great harmonies.