Some of you might remember when I asked for help on lyrics writing and singing on a song I’ve written a while ago (original topic here)
I ended up keeping the initial vocal take because I’m just unable to come up with lyrics that fit the melody in a better way. I took my time to add a few tracks and mix the song. This is my first mix. It sounds ok to me but I just finished and I’d like fresh ears to listen to it and maybe point out things I overlooked or unbalanced.
I’m also taking any feedback on the arrangement and performance. I can go back to recording stage if needed although there are some tracks I won’t change (lower octave vocals because I can only sing that low when I have a sore throat, and guitar solo because it’s not me playing but a friend of mine).
So please, bash away!