I have everything in there now. Lyrics still are shakey. I have two different choruses. One at a minute and the other at two minutes. The second is more lively. Not much of a song, but it got me going again.
Sincerely
Paul
nov challange.mp3 (3.7 MB)
Yay! You are joining this very select challenge Paul - what a marvel you are… nearly deceased and now composing (what is that terrible joke about Beethoven?)…
Lovely sweetness… and I particularly love the ‘o shit, I’m at a loss for words’ it totally cracked me up after all the sweetie niceness…
yay… keep going - there are NEVER enough nice love songs!
I’m hoping to do some recording this morning too, just wrote a scary nightmare thingie 
For some strange reason it’s given me a target, this trying to actually make myself write something new… fun.
And as for barfing while you sing… you have been spending too much time with that clownpenisfart I think… 
O, with your format, maybe you need a space between your words and the insert file???
Hi Emma Not sure what you meant between the words and the insert? Anyway, I had some sharp acoustic sounds today that I couldn’t find the source. It happened to be my acoustic guitar hitting my heart monitor on my right side. Ha ha I would have left those clunks there if they would have been in time with the song. Just another track to mess with to prove I can still write a song. I will listen for suggestions and then hit it again. Got a few inches on snow last night. 20 degrees with a sharp wind. 5 expected tomorrow morning. I hate the cold now. Can’t wait to go see my daughter in Texas. I hope Mr wiener fart has some ideas. HI to Haden
Paul
you wild thing you!!!
with your track, go into edit and try just ‘entering’ a space between the text and the audio file…
So cool to hear you up and making music again!
And you have snow? Yikes!!! Will have to work out what 20 degrees is in celsius 
edit: ahhh brrr that’s -7 and here’s me complaining today while we have 61 degrees 
It is fahrenheit…ha ha We are kinda backwards over here. I can’t get the song to post right. That is so me.
ahhh, i just noticed the site player seems to be not working today for new songs…
The Interstellar Fur Trader thread noted the issues and our noble @holster is looking into it…
trouble follows me
Fixed it for you, Paul. Don’t know what’s causing it, but the embed code is all messed up - Hopefully @holster can fix it.
You are the best. thanks I first get all angry and then I just shrug my shoulders and admit it is an age thing
sincerely
Paul
Sounding good. Thanks for sharing.
nice, I like the minor chords like at 2:04
Thanks bud I just got very tired of it tho. ha ha On to something with more spunk.
Paul