New song to review as of June 20th! Will return the favor!

Bash This Recording
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I posted a new song in my music website called “Put Away My Pout”; it is the song on top. Please tell me how you like the song, and how it can be improved, and I will return the favor! Here is my link:

https://www.soundclick.com/aaronaardvark/?content=songs