Hey, Jonathan, just a friendly, gentle nudge. Didn’t you recently have a thread about getting things done more efficiently? The voice sounds great in the first clip, but there’s no arrangement, so everything is a guess until it is all together. In light of that, I would say what you have will work great, so don’t mess around with it until you hear it with all the elements, then treat it quickly with your first instinct as to what it needs to sit properly. Give it the Jonathan sound and be confident.
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Two things.
I like the second version better in the clip.
Just my opinion but the song is too short. Maybe add some more words and a chorus?