recorded live this this one that’s always a bit trick to mix
Hmm, I’m not very conviced on this mix. To me, it sounds like you try to understand the song but you didn’t… 
There are lot of instruments playing in the mid-range and vocal isn’t sitting well.
Lower register of keyboards and bass (synth bass?) are fighting for the lead but it didn’t work either.
By the way, I checked Mike Senior’s mix and it doesn’t sound as clear and powerful as I’d like to.
Nice work anyway, this recording looks very tricky IMO.
Yeah these live tracked ones are not great to work with