Had just one more go at it
I like the intensity in this one. You could maybe pull back the male vocal a bit because it starts to dominate too much .
I like it!
Couple o’ things: There’s something odd about the keys track that comes in at like :20… almost like there’s two tracks and they’re phasing in a weird way or something. Might just be me but it sounds odd to my ears. Also, to add to what @redworks mentioned about the male vocal… I think the overall balance between the male and female vocals are incosistent. A lot of it is the male dominant, but her voice creeps up here n’ there. I also feel like I’m missing some of the good low end from the bass and synth tracks.
Cheers!
Tricky one this track. not keen on any of it really lol