catchy Chorus! Lyrics dont seem lame to me. they are simple and catchy.
For some reason I hear like an Aerosmith like scream coming up right after the chorus …“Monneyyyyy Talks…” haha. But don’t worry, I would most certainly not want you to blow your vocal chords
Hey Michelle. I just tried the high money talks. I have allergies presently and could only get out the money and not the talks without a choking episode. I also noticed it was dragging a bit and upped the speed from 114 to 120. Seems better. I need a whole new last verse that is inline with lawyers etc. Thanks for your listen and comments. Not a great song, but I was affraid I was going to lose my way, so this helped.
Hey Paul, nice’n’bluesy! I agree with Michelle - very catchy chorus. The style of loose harmonies you’ve been exploring lately is really interesting and individual. I could go with either speed. Keep on creatin’!