Mix by Skiman82

Pretty light. I would raise a bit bass and kick.
Phone effect on vocal was a good idea, but not on the whole song.

Same thoughts here… Your musical balances are good, I think you just need balanced monitoring. I would invest in some good headphones. I use Grado 325s (they were about $300 USD 30 years ago), it’s the best money I ever spent. You’ll still have to get used to how “pro” mixes sound on them, but it will be easier than cheap, hyped headphones with big inaccuracies… Good work!

If you get the chance, please listen to my mix and comment; I’d appreciate it!

Mike K Mix of Personality

To me, this mix makes the song very small. The vocal sounds as if locked into a phone. Also, to me, the long reverb on the vocal is sounds out of place.

I like the guitar sound.

There is way to little base and kick, as others have already pointed out.
Good luck!