Had another crack at it
Hey, as I like this song, I have a listen to this mix again… but I’ll review the mix&master later.
I don’t know why, but this mix (and I don’t remember the previous one so I could repeat what I said) sounds some kinda lofi to me, like it’s reproduced thru a 5" speaker or so…
Or maybe, you tried to mimic some '80 reference mixes and I don’t get it 
I would try to match what I have in mind with an additionnal EQ and here is what I get
with this EQ settings
where (1) is cutting the excessive midrange, (2) add some low-end for beefier kick and bass sounds, (3) is cutting prominent hihat sound, (4) is an HPF to avoid extra low-end, (5) brings back guitars a little after (3) cut, (6) puts vocals a bit on top after (3) cut
If it means anything
By the way, the mix is still balanced and nothing sounds faulty to me.
Nice job!!
Not really sure what you mean.I posted up on a mixing mastering site on facebook and lots of people said how good it was.Your eq sounds good.Im not really a mastering engineer i just have a go at at it .I’m sure a lot of my stuff could be vastly improved with some good mastering .
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Ok then, I’ll check the mastered version later.
I found this mix a bit shy on the low frequencies and a bit mid-heavy. This is what I tried to achieve/correct with this EQ.