Heard on studio monitors AV-40s (treated room) , also heard on audio technica headphones
its got an Enya feel to the whole thing. Definitely a very smooth creative mix.
Mixed well - clicks and such were removed or softened , chorus was on pitch so you have definitely put some hard work in it.
Track starts brilliantly but The smooth feeling fades away later, it was working well with the ambient, guitar delay.
I think mix should have kept going that direction with new creative ambient additions and possibly removal or some other tracks. With other instruments and chorus coming in, it gets a bit much and it shows in the compression. It gets over compressed and overall quality, feeling and emotion takes a hit.
Overall it is a very creative mix.
my suggestion is that you should think about revisiting it for fun and do some more ambient additions, remove some tracks and maybe a new softer, subtle ambient percussion instead, smooth and chilly pad and carry on that “vibe” later as well.