Lucas Whitaker - Dead Roses [Emo Hip-Hop] FEEDBACK NEEDED

Hey guys, I just finished this track, and I was wondering if anyone could give me some constructive feedback. Cheers!

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Hey Lucas! Thanks for posting this. I’m at work at the moment, so I’ll have to check it out tonight, but hopefully someone will check it out soon! :+1:

That is sounding good. I wonder if some more automation on the vocals to pull them back a touch when the kick and bass is out might give it even more movement.

1:00 to 1:15 the timing was a little off on these phrases…actually big part of it seems to be just a touch off on the phrasing on verses.
Everything else is fine with me.