Ahh yay, a new song from you and with a different twist for sure… shades of ‘mellow yellow’ - crikey, haven’t thought of that song for a while
Cool song, and yes, does capture that spinning trippy sort of vibe for sure… hmm actually with the fx on the vocal and the round and round I found it almost tooo spinny as the song progressed. The drums feel a little bit sort of sluggish at times… I like how the beats change… a synth could work wonderfully for this song, hmm, now I’m listening again, I wondered about bringing the guitars up a bit more, there’s a nice bass in there but it sits a little low in the mix to me. You are such a cool songwriter Paul, it’s always a delight to hear your fresh melodic approach… enjoyed this!!