Yeah, I need to work on the vox. Issue with this one was that I needed to sing while I played to keep track of all the changes. Then I was stuck with an extra vocal (panned a little to the right with the guitar). This mushes things up a bit. I’ll try re-recording that guitar/ pulling out the one that has the vocal on it. Anything else that stands out? EQ maybe a bit harsh, probably tried to compensate for the mushy vocals.
I was rushed with the first listen. A track came off my bulldozer and it bout killed me getting it back on. haha
folks here would tell you that i am not good at dissecting a track. That being said I usually just blurt my first feelings. I promised myself never to comment on vocals…instant conflict…not worth it. Your voice is pretty special and the delivery inviting. Try it once with nothing on the vox except maybe some EQ. Just for the heck of it. Track needs to be 2:30 + tho.
Andy might chirp??
Great tune man, sounds perfect from where I’m sitting.
Shout out to all the old BMX dudes out there, I AM that guy (with a drivers license hehe).
You’re never to old to be a kid, in fact I recommend it.
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I’m not your technical expert, but I enjoyed this little ditty as is. You sing it with lots of feeling and authenticity. When all you have is an acoustic guitar and a simple piano riff, vocal errors are exposed, but there weren’t any IMHO.
I never had one of these, but would have liked to. Love the handlebars!.