My wife knows I don’t like the smell of bleach. So I came in from outside and see, for the first time in our house, a lit candle. She said I know you would freak out about the smell so I am trying to mask it with this candle. So I grabbed the candle and sat in my lazyboy. I said “well it doesn’t smell that bad I guess, but I still smell the bleach” all of a sudden she sees me running toward the studio. Why are you running she askes. I said "I just saw a scary face in the candle and have to write a song about it. she said like the voices in the wind one???/
Having trouble singing. Especially with the wierd notes I used. I can usually sing quietly with more feeling, but the ole allergies i think have finally one.
The two main chords (capo 3) are A hammer the Bb and G hammer the C
No reverb on anything except the surprise break part. ha ha Saturated with reverb…to a point of almost repeating itself. Any thoughts of what I can add or change would be greatly appreciated. thanks in advance
With some hints from Stan, I found an EQ that had an increased low end for the kick and turned the drums up in general. I also extended the ending a bit to let it ring like the crash cymbal. I have a vocal delay that says sweeten the vocal that is set at 6.5. I turned it to 5 and put it on the main vox and the bgv’s.
Really tired of this now. I used my DI breedlove and filled up some dead spots. Bass seems loud now on these headphones, but not in the studio. Not my best, but the process is always worth it. Back and forth with friends is the best.
Keeping this all deep inside
Deep within this flickering candle… images I see
Partial faces feeble arms… they gesture calling me
A gifted dance from a gentle breeze… a haunting mistic tease
Fearing now they’ll end my life….could you help me please
Keeping all this deep inside….shakin and a shiverin tryin to hide
Keeping all this deep inside…accusations I’ll deny…forever…and ever
A new candle a new light…slightly smaller not as bright
Shockingly it did not matter…the’ve not taken flight
Shimmer glimmer hyp…no…tize… exposing evil eyes
Mesmerizing with their daggers… someone’s sposed to die