It twas a mutt that necessitated a cut
It’s a nice idea. I think it can be a good straight rock song if you want. It kind of reminds me of Come Dancing by the Kinks, but you can turn it into almost anything you want with some imagination. I’m thinking fat drums under your higher register singing would be a nice contrast.
Hey Bob I just told my wife I had to boot it. I shook my head every time I would go back and tweak thinking what and why? ha ha I tried to make it a bit jerky for some reason? I get the Kinks comparison. thanks for the listen bud