Feedback would be incredibly welcome! This is my band’s next single, I want to make sure it’s pleasing to the ear before we release it!

You guys have got yourself a real top forty with that one. It’ll be the first billboard hit with lead (hard “e” sound) hollow point bullets.

??? Way less reverb on the gun shots. Sounds like he’s shooting in a god damn cave.

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I felt like compositionally it was losing focus after the flatulence, but it rallied strongly for the fusillade of gunfire at the end.

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Suspense for the big payoff. Total mental breakdown!

Maybe this is a “live” mix?

I give it a 72. It has a big beat the kids can dance to.

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