This is a different version of the track myself and a friend wrote.
I am singing on this too
I think it all sounds good, but I’d tone down those drums quite a bit. I think they are too up front and dry for the song. They are demanding too much attention for what they are.
Cheers i will experiment a bit more with that
Made some change
Those happy pop-jangley guitars sound great… and that set me up. Then the lyrics came in. Hehahahaha… TOTALLY not what the music had me expecting. I’m not saying that’s a bad thing… just how it struck me. Overall I think it sounds pretty slick! Nice work.
Cool mate .Glad you like it and thanks for the feedback
I like the vibe of this song. Fun listening. Feels like I’m back in the 80’s.
Nice work !
Cheers mate that was what we wanted an 80s vibe
Sounds great, Alan! The latest version is a really nice update!
Cheers Andrew ,glad you think so