Yes! Please add a nice lazy jam section to the end of this. (Similar to the one at 1:30.) Maybe you could add interest to it by doing an answer-back type response with another guitar voicing? Or maybe bring in a Rhodes or B3 or something? No idea if that would work, just thinking out loud.
Seriously. You’ve got everything working here and something like that would just put it over the top! (AND make it last longer. ) Love the guitar sounds too, by the way.
I’m glad @ncls commented on this again, I had forgotten about this song!