Bash first rock jam of the year

Bash first rock jam of the year
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#1

Just a jam so far. no vocals.

Lotsa new stuff for me though:

new laptop
new Slate everything bundle
new S Gear amp sims

let me know how it sounds overall…vibe, tones, levels, balance, issues etc. Static mix. (lotta new stuff but it still sounds like me lol)

ok, I admit, I had to edit and put up mix #2 cuz the first one was leaning like the tower of Piza lol

intro
verse
prechorus
chorus
verse
prechorus
chorus
bridge (breakdown)
solo
chorus 2x
outro

Thanks, JJ


Amp Sim tips
#2

Sounds pretty good on my laptop and earbuds.


#3

Reminds me a lot of the music in DOOM from the 1990s. Pretty cool. I noticed that sometimes the guitar seemed a bit ahead of the drums. The arrangement could probably benefit from something to kind of fill out the mix a bit, to my taste anyway. Like a pad. Just some different textures. Right now it’s really mid-rangy with the guitars front and center.


#4

You played DOOM? You are super cool. Like the demo, don’t wanna bash it too much because I don’t want to dissuade you and your creativity.


#5

Sounds like it has promise. Levels wise, the drums need to gel with the bass more for it to all sound cohesive. Possibly just a tweak of the bass level would do it.


#6

Hi Me likes. I am in cans and it sounds a little thin in the mids??? Like to hear more bass too, especially in the verse. That’s just me I bet. Guitar playing and sound are very good. Like to hear a little riff now and then of a screaming nature. ha ha This will be a blast to add a vocal to. What a great start. This will be fun to hear it emerge full sound.


#7

Sounds good to me but it will need vocals to complete the tune.