It might be a mutt, I don’t know. I have never been able to sound modern, and each time I think I have finally done it, reality strikes again. That doesn’t mean I will stop trying. I wanted to do a duet with the gal playing hard to get etc, The lyrics don’t mean much right now and don’t make sense. It’s just a way I can develop a melody line. I am singing F# to G through the verse and then trying to harmonize to that. Not sure if that works. I tried to make a more powerful chorus, but the second part loses the punch. I am not liking using the AKG 414 for vocals. It is very bright and picks up my computer noise big time.
Anyway, I was wondering what feel this has. It is out of the 60’s again, or???
It is only one minute with one verse and one chorus. I used the PRS with no effects thru the LA 610.
Up date I changed the chorus by using a C chord instead of a G as requested by Wicked.
update two. this song just didn’t take off. I thought I had some promise? I won’t shitcan it yet, but It isn’t doing anything for me at the moment…lame…haha
If you believe …sung f# to g in the melody line
You walked by I saw you wink I’m not impressed I bet you’re think I’m cra…zy for that (gal) D G D G A
why you got that angry face you’re mad I guess I’m in your space but maybe …you’re sad (guy)
if you believe in me I will I believe in you…I gotta lotta love to give you…got some hugs and kisses too AC
if you believe in me I will I believe in you … can you put your trust in me I’ll prove to you I’m what you need
Keep my cool just think this thru deep in my heart do I need you what should… I…do
She don’t know that I am nice I need some way to break the ice what should…. I…… do