Hey, very nice song, nicely performed!
I think there’s nothing wrong with your mix as everyone agreed.
But I found something odd, like things didn’t match properly.
This song and mix (the first one) came from '80, with '80 hardware, '80 mics, '80 guys, '80 playing, '80 feeling,'80 ways of micking, '80 ways of mixing and at the end, sounds like a '80 song recorded and mixed in the '80.
Your mix is quite the same except the mix, from 2017 with references, tools and wishes from that, and I found a bit off regarding the whole chain of the song.
By the way, your mix is quite good and very spot on regarding actual songs!
Good job to me!