I just saw this. Love the song and the arrangement. You voice is great too. I don’t have much to add to what the others have said, other than I’m really looking forward to your next version!
Just a thought: if “fuckus on me” is too problematic, maybe you could change the lyric to some like “Twenty years later I’m looking at me” or something similar?
Really nice song all around - thanks for sharing it with us!