Made a few adjustments to this

[ColdRoomStudio]

@Anthony

If it were economical and available I might be impressed enough to hand over the entire catalog to get the “ColdRoomStudio’s” treatment package deal. Unfortunately, Free, as with naturally everyone else, is not in the vocabulary when discussing most things.

Well, as they say… you get what you pay for!

@Anthony

Your song does sound really good in my headphones but at 5 a.m. I can’t check through the external speakers to see how it translates for me there.

Thanks, that’s good to know.

@Anthony

As for the imagery of it… the girl sipping red wine while lounging in the grass in an evening gown and enjoying watching the symphony perform on a mostly cloud free starry night, by the end of the night was ridding atop some dudes shoulders while punching beach balls to her also half clothed, half baked girlfriends atop other behemoth’s shoulder’s before running off with the band to party hearty!

Well, it’s good to know that it conjured up some imagery, at least. Not exactly the imagery I’d hoped for, but it’s your impression, not mine.

I will say this, as with the other track I posted, listening to the lyrics helps somewhat. Call me pretentious if you like, but despite whatever may be the current trend in lyrics, the words are not just meaninglessness syllables whose sole function is to carry the melody.

Thanks again for listening and commenting

[Anthony]

@ColdRoomStudio

Not exactly the imagery I’d hoped for

Sorry to have disappointed. I’ll try to do better for you next time… no wait, I won’t.

Thanks, message received loud n clear.

[ColdRoomStudio]

@Anthony

Sorry to have disappointed. I’ll try to do better for you next time… no wait, I won’t.

Hmm… that’s a rather strange thing to say…You haven’t disappointed me. Disappointment implies that I had some sort of expectation, and I didn’t. How could I? I don’t know you, I don’t know your tastes or preferences. As I said above - it’s your impression. That’s what it’s all about. I’ve doing this for decades, so I’m used to getting all sorts of impressions. Each to his/her own.

I’m not disappointed that it didn’t convey the imagery I intended either…

That’s part of what I love about the subversiveness of a song. The old adage is “Sing a happy song sad, and a sad song happy”…

How many people think “Every Breath You Take” is a gooey love song, or “Born in the USA” is a gung-ho, hand-on-the-heart, patriotic ode to all that is good and righteous in 'merica? People take whatever impression they want from a song.

As long as they listen and like it, I guess! It’s not the songwriter’s fault if they don’t bother to listen to the lyrics!