Brilliant, Dave !!
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The latest version sounds awesome! I love how you changed the song, and the new lyrics are perfect. I don’t have a lot of comments–I just really enjoyed it!
Love the progression on the versions. The last version is really crisp and it allows you to just listen to the song as the first version I was more focused on trying to figure out what exactly it was that seemed to be out of place. Nice job.
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Nice work dude!
Its sort of nick cave singing for R.E.M and it works!
Good luck 
Made me want to get my version done now.
Thanks for the nudge
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Many thanks for the kind words everyone, and for all the great suggestions I got for this arrangement. Those are what got it to the next level, made all the difference. I really appreciate it!! 
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